Literary essay of "The Phoenix"

The story of "the phoenix" by Silbia t.w is a story about a man called Mr.Poldero that tortutra a phoenix to earn money. In this essay the characters lord strawberry and Mr.Poldero will be analised. Lord Strawberry is a man that lovesds birds, he did not thik on money so he died poor after the second world war. "when lord strawberry died, he died penniless". One day he  want to  to have a  Phoenix, he goes to Arabia  to have one. He treated the phoenix very well, he is important because when he dies the phoenix goes to mr.poldero.
Mr.Poldero is the countrary from lord strawberry, because he only thinks in money, he does not like birds and he does not think on  the things that he do to obtain money, he tortures the phoenix to obtain money, for example when he put's the phoenix in a cage whith a cat to fight. he is a bad man who only think on money.
In this essay I analysed the characters who are complete the oposite, one respete the nature and the other not.

Tommy's Diary

Dear diary,
I know that a girl stole tow chocolate bars. I want to say to her that the things that she does are bad but I cant, so I think that if I leave a note saying "dont do this any more or you will sufer all your life" She will read it and she will stop stealing things. I cant telll it to her face to face because I dont want to lose that thing that isnt in the routine,  but if I dont tell her, one day she will go to prison, and I dont want that. she is only a girla.
BYE.

Dear diary,
Today I foun Rosa with that girl, Rosa was holding the arm of the little girl and started to shake it. Rosa was saying that she stole our candies. To make Rosa shut up, I hit her. All the people  were looking. Suddely the mom of the little girl appear and asked, what is the matter?  And Rosa said that the girl stole our candy. I said that I leave her steal it but the mother took the girl from the arm and went to her house angry at her. Before she left thecandy store, the girl showed her tangue,  I dont know why.
BYE.

My famous person

....was born in Rosario in 1987. He is a good footballer. He is called the best of the world in football. The first time I saw him was in T.V.
He has brown hair, short beard, white skin, he is middle sized and thin. He is fast, strong, nice and good person.
He is suseptible, ambitious, opptimist, and he loves to play football.
He likes playing football with his friends.  He is a family man and plays the Play.
In conclusion, He likes playing football and is a family man and a good person. In my opinion he is the best  football player and I know that all the world thinks that too.